WALT: Write a truly captivating Holiday recount
This week we have been making recounts and here's mine.The part I liked the most was finding the background.
The hardest part was writing it.
Maybe next time I could have more ideas.
Kia ora Kedjron, I really like the presentation of your Holiday recount and how you put in the effort to include a background and easy to read text. You did well to write a descriptive recount using Show, Don't tell. Maybe next time work on proofreading, punctuation and adding more detail. Keep up the good effort! Blog ya later, Ms Peters.
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